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I used to write when I was younger but stopped for several years.Coming to this site kind of rejuvinated my writing.Well,anyways I just wrote this poem recently and I hope you guys recieve it well.Tell me what you think.(and be honest! biggrin.gif )

The End Game

Step inside,world with pride

Lost is done, nowhere to hide

joy and warmth, enough to share

no deprivations of love,we love,we care

sins set free,vanity afar

regret no more,The past is done,The past is done

glowing figures we are, we will not bend

we know there is no end again my friend

We dreamed,we lust,sweet serenity

joined we are now, passed that possibility

never the same,we are never to blame

no rain,shadows or cold eyes to ruin this game.

edit-cold eyes for dark clouds

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Guest Keeley

wow, cool poem! man i wish i could write poems, my sister is really good at it but if i tried.... actually, let not go there! wink.gif

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