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Vince Is A Stud Muffin

Poem I wrote about my face and looks when I'm down

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LIFE'S FACE

When I look in the mirror

I see a face

Not of a man

Of disgrace

What has happened to the man I used to be

Why have I fallen so far

Been wounded so deeply

When I look in a pond

I see a face

Not of a man

Of loneliness

A life of waste

What has happened to the man I used to be

Why have I drifted so far

Lost faith so easily

When I look in my dreams

I see a face

Not of a man

Of an angel

With its sweet loving grace

I ask

What has happened to the man I used to be

"My child, in Heaven

We all look differently"

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LIFE'S FACE

When I look in the mirror

I see a face

Not of a man

Of disgrace

What has happened to the man I used to be

Why have I fallen so far

Been wounded so deeply

When I look in a pond

I see a face

Not of a man

Of loneliness

A life of waste

What has happened to the man I used to be

Why have I drifted so far

Lost faith so easily

When I look in my dreams

I see a face

Not of a man

Of an angel

With its sweet loving grace

I ask

What has happened to the man I used to be

"My child, in Heaven

We all look differently"

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thats really good, though to keep the flow and rhythm you should add commas and things like that.

Really good, for real! anymore up in that ticker of yours? I oculd never write like that.

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Chains bind me

To my bed

Haunting dreams

Make me wish for death

The Devil calls to me

Give up your hope

The days grow longer

With less and less hope

I fall on my knees

And cry so easily

God I love you

I need you more than anything

In my moment of greatest need

I give my life to you

Hold my heart so true

For I am the lost sheep

And you are the shepherd

Guide me

To the flock

So I may

Open the lock

Which holds my heart shut

So I may open to the world

To The angel within me

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Guest Shjaker

Nice poems Dragon smile.gif I write some poetry too when I'm really, really down. Some of them are morbid, and some are actually written with hopeful intentions XD Writing really does help get some feelings out though ^_^

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Guest Zitro

Man, I really enjoyed those poems. Especially the first one. I wish this world would be like your dreams.

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thanks guys I can only write when I am feeling a certain extreme emotion. Shjaker really put your poems on here I am sure they are as good or better than mine. I would like to see what a fellow poet shall right. JohnJoz I got a pic of me from ThanksGiving where I am clear from the accutane but no one right now. I currently have 5 active zits that are like just small red bitches. HOpefully they will go away and I won't get anymore. I will probably write some more poems anyways, but most of my poems are love poems.

- peace

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wow those poems are seriously good.

I like the quotes I found, a guy from somewhere. ANyway, more poems please, anyone???

c'mon, don't be shy!

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Guest Brandon

Do a search for poetry and you'll find this thread where a lot of people submitted their poems. It was from this past summer.

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Deep in my soul

It fights there

Hope vs. despair

Black vs. White

The endless fight

Colors can bleed

To form 1

The color of evil

The color of the blocked sun

Where can I run

What shall I hide

From the never changing past

My future will not obide

Say goodbye

Say so long

Listen to this one passionate song

The more I fight

The more I try

The harder it becomes

To open my eyes

And see the truth

Behind the mask

A fake beginning

A worse past

Memories gone

Of the things I loved

I stand

Here with no love

As slight as a whispering wind

I drowned in my own guilt

My own sin

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Dam, those are some F'ing awesome poems. Have you ever thought about getting any of those published? I sent a few of mine into Poetry.com, and my poems are being put into 2 books!

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Guest OnlyJoe

Ive wrote two peoms that got published when i was a kid.

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Guest OnlyJoe

This is my poem.

I Hate

OnlyJoe

i hate having no money

i hate the upper class.

i hate snow

i hate the the summer

i hate when i have work to do

i hate people with BIG range rover type cars, they think there tanks and cut everyone up!

i hate annoying customers.

i hate women with prams/buggys they think they rule everything.

i hate when batteries run out and you dont have fresh ones.

i hate when u go to take a bath and theres hair in it.

i hate Jamie Oliver (celebrity tv chef)

i hate the film 'titanic'

i hate fish cakes, but like fish fingers.

i hate simon cowell

i hate overated british comedys, like 'the royle family' and 'Little brtain'

i hate 'Friends', 'Will and grace', 'Seinfeld' and other stereotypes.

i hate George Bush and co

i hate acne

i hate the general public.

I hate.... This poem maybe?

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