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i was reading a post by checkit and i respect any1's creativity but his rhymes were absolutely HORRID..no offense haha

anyway i don't like to criticize and not be able to back it up so i put my money where my mouth is and whipped this out in about 3 minutes

ahem...

yo this is a tight thread

it makes me forget about every single white head

when i rap i don't need to wash or use medicine

im not even thinkin about dan's regimen

go back to your room cuz im invadin this place

my rhymes feel good like moisturizer on my face

if acne was like raps i'd have the smoothest skin

and i'd never have to touch that damn eucerin

and if you try to diss this shit, the consequences are simple

whip out the nine and pop ya...like a pimple

and the one reason my rhythm might bring me fame

is cuz you can feel it within ya body, like fuckin accutane

thank you, thank you, oh you are all 2 kind!

haha but seriously did i make any1 out there smile..or better yet bob their head and maybe throw up a gang sign or something?

oh and no i'm not really going to "whip out the nine and pop anybody" it's just hip-hop s ladies and gents

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aha i put a little thing of mine on that thread too just now, not as good as urs, but i think its better thank check it's. read it on his thread if u want.

impressive man, good stuff biggrin.gif

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This is for "I'd rather be boozin"

check it, you tryin to sound hype with ur pimple rap

ur a fucking geek that needs to run laps

work out some muscle n get ready to rumble

cuz imma throw some words at ya to make you fumble

I dont give a fuck about your regimen

it's probably callin 222-tips on a daily

just admit it, ur zits are the size of cherrys

thats why you dont call 911

cuz you got the fear of seeing someone

man i dont give a fuck about your lotions

i'll fuckin rape ya after givin u magic potion

leavin ya to wake up with a face erosion

that's how it works cuz im korrupted

stop frontin, tellin others u got a 9

i'll fuckin shank ya an make your 9, mine

only shit u popin is them pills

only way for you to get the thrills

cuz we all know your a loser

like your name says it, your a fuckin boozer

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i was reading a post by checkit and i respect any1's creativity but his rhymes were absolutely HORRID..no offense haha

anyway i don't like to criticize and not be able to back it up so i put my money where my mouth is and whipped this out in about 3 minutes

ahem...

yo this is a tight thread

it makes me forget about every single white head

when i rap i don't need to wash or use medicine

im not even thinkin about dan's regimen

go back to your room cuz im invadin this place

my rhymes feel good like moisturizer on my face

if acne was like raps i'd have the smoothest skin

and i'd never have to touch that damn eucerin

and if you try to diss this shit, the consequences are simple

whip out the nine and pop ya...like a pimple

and the one reason my rhythm might bring me fame

is cuz you can feel it within ya body, like fuckin accutane

thank you, thank you, oh you are all 2 kind!

haha but seriously did i make any1 out there smile..or better yet bob their head and maybe throw up a gang sign or something?

oh and no i'm not really going to "whip out the nine and pop anybody" it's just hip-hop s ladies and gents

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CUt to the chase checkit, get out of his face...

Or i got 2 mutherfuckin fists you aint ready to taste...

we call the shots, your newb ass it smoked

13 posts? what is this a mutherfuckin joke???

So try to keep it real, this is all for fun..

you step outta line and we'll take you for dumb

you dont wanna go there cuz you'll neva come back

we're like a loaded gun and we aint gonna cut any slack..

now you might think im harsh, but i assure you this

i got a heart full of love and a mind full of bliss..

but when you actin a fool thinkin your soooo cool

i got news for ya kid ya gonna get schooled...

i dont care if its in ryhmes or in straight words..

we got an army here that'll tear you apart, nerd..

and if you still think that your the fuckin man,

well get Dan on your ass and youll be banned by admin....

haha just messin dude. this is fun, dont take it seriously, cuz thats all i got.

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hahaha this is actually kinda fun...you like it realangel??

thats my first freestyle ever...im not even sure why this thread got goin anyway...kinda a change for the emo board dont ya think???

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this is for "stinkomanK20X6"

check it, you want me to cut to the chase

im already finished, i see you at the end of this race

stop kissing your boyfriends ass an get off my case

now stfu and get out of my face

look at you, talkin so much shit

you ain't harsh, your soft like your heart

so emotional, after this rap you gonna fall apart

and there's more posts comin, this is only the start

you sayin you got an army on this forum, u must be jokin

so lets guess whos the real nerd

you know its you, you fuckin turd

stop makin up shit just to be heard

so first you frontin about blastin

then you spittin out about admins

your more fake than "I'd rather be boozin" an his lines

just a bunch of fags that don't compare to me combine

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HAHAHAHA that was a little better man...

i think you took it pretty seriously though from the looks of things...anyway nice rebuttle..

maybe ill try to make another one up tomorrow...

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This is for "I'd rather be boozin"

check it, you tryin to sound hype with ur pimple rap

ur a fucking geek that needs to run laps

work out some muscle n get ready to rumble

cuz imma throw some words at ya to make you fumble

I dont give a fuck about your regimen

it's probably callin 222-tips on a daily

just admit it, ur zits are the size of cherrys

thats why you dont call 911

cuz you got the fear of seeing someone

man i dont give a fuck about your lotions

i'll fuckin rape ya after givin u magic potion

leavin ya to wake up with a face erosion

that's how it works cuz im korrupted

stop frontin, tellin others u got a 9

i'll fuckin shank ya an make your 9, mine

only shit u popin is them pills

only way for you to get the thrills

cuz we all know your a loser

like your name says it, your a fuckin boozer

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very good indeed... smile.gif

yes yes this is kinda fun...we'll see how checkit reacts...

kelp im gonna go adead and assume you were being sarcastic...

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thanx Elsa...gotta keep things in order somehow... smile.gif

lol, i made another one in the other thread too, its kinda good i guess....

hi

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oh come on elsa you had to have liked my rhymes!! i want some props dammnit!!! as for checkit...i saw that you wrote a verse for me but i was 2 lazy to read it..i'm sure it's below average with a lot of stuff that doesn't rhyme

am i right or what?

keep up the so-so work hombre

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yes i got mad skillz for droppin ill lyrical mayhem....

maybe ill try to make one for you too, but lets see what checkit says first..

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this is for "Liv"

check it, so what you sayin

you think I like you at all

prepare for the worse, my words like waterfall

I don't need to get a check up with no doc

your the one with the so called chickenpocks

stop ya yappin like the whore you are

here, take a sniff, now take a drift

join him if you know what i mean, if ya both wanna rap, at least try to be clean

here i'll go with ease, cuz the real shit will hit you like a desease

how the fuck am i tryin to be cool because i rap

your doing the same shit so why give a crap

thats your opinion that you think stinko is better than me

your both low in taste and ya just cant see

when i rap i like to be free

if ya dont like it, then why dont ya cry to oprah winfrey

damn girl, i ain't mad

im just dissapointed that your rap is bad

and of course ya rap ain't worth any money

man, that was the only line that was funny

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checkit seriously you need to make more complex rhymes if you want to gain any sort of props from the likes of me

stop with the weak mono syllables

like "mad" and "bad" for example

those rhymes are uglier than Danny Devito on Laguna Beach

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check it hun, not sure how old you are, but take boozin's advice. also be orginal in your rhymes. the copying stuff ain't cool. find your own rhymes.

examples

Drifter88's rhyme: Hed be like, "man dont be rapping, you lookin like a foo"

I know you just tryin to be coo

Checkit's response: listen here sun, i ain't no foo

an i ain't tryin to act coo

&

Liv's rhyme: i just thought that it would be funny...

it's not like im doing this to get any money...

Checkit's response:and of course ya rap ain't worth any money

man, that was the only line that was funny

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this is for "I'd rather be boozin"

check it, you think i rap to impress you

can't ya understand that im dissin you

so you dont rap to me no more cuz you want to be serious

so i guess my rapping makes you too furious

how does your last line even make sense

im still waiting here stuck in suspense

is that it, is it over

you are full of shit, you dont deserve to spit

just logg off and pretend your busy

anymore of me, and you'll be in a frenzy

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